WANNA WRITE
A STORY?
Hi there! Are you just dying to share your
personal fattening fantasy with the rest of your fellow social malcontents? Are
you tired of stories that don't quite fit the vision that you've mentally held
and fondled all these years? Want to get the Real Thing out there for all to
see? Then why not try your hand at writing your own Fanta-sizer Tale? It's fun,
ever so cathartic, and while it may not impress those members of the
Sex-You-Really-Like, you will be subject to the admiration of your
peers. Provided you write a good story, of course.
With that in mind, the ever-helpful Weight
Room drones have collected a few tips for all you would-be storywriters.
Tip # 1: Proofread - we're not just talking grammar
here, but also ensuring that you've got all the right words and numbers in your
story. Nuthin' confuses a reader, for instance, more than to read that a
woman's gained a hundred pounds over the course of a year when you've actually
meant a thousand pounds: it definitely undercuts all those descriptions of
immobility that you've worked so hard to include in the latter part of your
story.
On the grammar front, remember some basic
rules.
Oh yes, and if you have a spell check
feature on your word processing program, why not use it? If, by chance, some
member of the Sex-You-Really-Like happens to read your story, how are you gonna
convince 'em that you'll be diligent and attentive to their needs if you can't
even muster up enough energy to click your spell checker?
Tip # 2: Observe - look at as many fat people as you
can. It'll enhance your descriptive powers as a writer, and, besides, can you
think of a better way to pass the time? If anyone approaches you upset over the
fact that you've been ogling 'em for the last half hour in public, simply say
that you're a writer and you're considering using 'em as the protagonist in a
story. Who knows? It might even work!
Tip # 3: Don't forget the foreplay - as a Fanta-sizer,
you may be eager to jump to the Good Stuff in your writing, but most stories
require a degree of build-up. If it'll make things easier, start by writing the
end of your story first then going back to the set-up. Some of the greatest
works of literature in the Western World have been written inside out. (No, we’re
not gonna say which ones - you'll just have to guess!) Work to insert some
life-like information in your story: even the most out-there fantasy needs some
small grounding.
Tip # 4: Listen - and remember that real people don't
talk in multiple paragraph exposition. Unless they're a politician.
Tip # 5: Think visual - don't forget that you're
writing for the web, so consider that big ol' monitor right in front of you.
Nothing is more likely to induce glazed disinterest than text that doesn't take
into the account the way it looks on a computer screen, that drones on and on
without any consideration for the reader's eye (particularly those of us who
are getting older and bi-focaled), featuring run-on sentences that include too
many bits of information or story action for the reader to keep track of,
particularly when you consider how short the average attention span of the
average reader is in these days of quick-cut movies and ten-second sound bites
and all the other detritus of the twenty-first century that we're all trying to
escape in the first place with a simple fantasy about a woman who gains 476
pounds magically and instantaneously by accidentally ingesting a glass of
seltzer mixed with pop rocks or a quasi-realistic story about another woman who
gains an average of seventy-five pounds a week by eating more food than is
humanly possible in one sitting - but, who cares, this is only fiction, right?
- or yet another story about a sadist who is able to spontaneously make his
fattened victims love the fact that they've been made mega-sized simply through
the force of his oh-so-imposing personality, but - and let's not lose the point
here - if your text is visually blocky, many of your readers won't even reach
the good parts that we've already established you've spent a long time writing,
and do you really want 'em to just skim over all that hard work?
White (or in this case: light purple) space
increases readership.
That's it. Now all you need are a plot, some
attractive characters and a good thesaurus with more than five synonyms for
“fat.” When you're finished, why not send a copy of your story to The Weight
Room? We promise to thoroughly mishandle it and get the pages out of order,
post it with a humiliating childhood picture and then send a linking email out
to every member of your family. Fame and fortune are just around the corner!
Send that story to:
Your
Friends In the Weight Room.
And keep on fanta-sizing!
-Wilson Barbers -